Bread Dating Simulator

Loved it, though i secretly wanted to meet a baguette! I included it in my Ren'Py Jam part 4 video, i hope you don't mind! 

THIS GAME IS AMAZING. Your writing is brilliant, I could've never come up with something so cute and funny! For being the most boiled down story, I've never been so invested in something before. 

Very good work, I honestly think you've made one of the best games in this jam.

I can tell this is your first game, you have potential, but there is a glitch (I think, it only happened once so my computer might be to blame) where without clicking anywhere near the save button it might pull up the save menu and it can happen at least three times in a row, the dialog can be kinda bland in the pan-chan's route with the endings for both of them seeming a bit forced (Well that secret(?) one was kinda funny, and if you made the game longer I might have not felt like they were forced, and for a five minute(?) game I did have a  good understanding of the characters) and the narration can feel like it's just repeating what was said in different words sometimes, and, as I said before, I see potential in you, so I'm following.